in my opinion
I think the beginning is perfect and the middle is impeccable, and the end is...well, needs an ending... I adore your style of organizing your instruments and your style in music. When I first heard it, it felt like I was in an imaginary land filled with villagers going to the farm land to crush the wheat or little children running to a tree and climbing to the top...playing. I felt relaxed and very calm when hearing this...