Anthem for droning robots...
With a two note bass line. Sorry... The drum part is just not a pleasing rhythm, and the whole song is just a little bit repetitive for me. I think if there were more things happening music wise, a drum part like that might fit. I think for the amount of composition here, the drum part should be very basic and understated so it doesn't clutter anything up. I gave this song an honest rating. I'm sure if you practice and EXPERIMENT a little more, you'll come out with something great! Cheers!
All i can ask is honesty and your not the only one tha said that so yeah im practicing balancing my musics instruments :D
BTW im a way better animator than a music composer