excuse the bad singing, and bare with me through the first 30 seconds.
play it loud, listen for the bass guitar :D
there's a lot of work that could be done on this. the vocals, are pitchy and offkey, there's several mistakes in the performing, certain transitions sound weird, the crappy gear im using is harsh on the ears and so on and so on.
wow a 1.30 score. im worse than i thought. lol.