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Thanx for viewing, listening and rating. Enjoy the piano

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DUDE!!!

All 10 stars from me man >:D
I've got to say, this calm tune reminds me of maybe a summer day with my friends,
just hanging out. Maybe going on a trip. idk, maybe its just me... lol anyway u have improved since ur first audio submission, i can say that without any doubts :D
keep it up man!

~Xarosas


Machine9 responds:

Thanks a lot... I've been working hard recently trying to get the beats to match and get the tempo just right. Yeah things have changed since my first soundtrack


Decent but disperate.

I did enjoy this song, all of the individual bits were well done but I have some criticisms.

Your drums kick in at ~:11 and it's good, they quickly pick up at ~:12 to what sounds like a lead in to something, a change-up or maybe a melodic addition (something with some power).

The problem is it never comes and these build up drums continue for WAY to long (till ~:44) where they settle down into a pattern that fits the piano and eventual guitar style.

My suggestion would be to tone it down a bit, maybe have the build up start a couple bars before the guitar begins (instead of right after the drums start), and finish off with a crash as the guitar begins. (Just a thought.)

Otherwise, it's a solid track, keep it up =)
4/8


Machine9 responds:

I just now noticed that I put build up in the beginning. When I was making this sound track I wanted to put a build up to create a drop but, I just couldn't figure out how to do it with a piano. Thanx for the imput

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Credits & Info

Machine9
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Listens
528
Downloads
22
Votes
12
Score
2.63 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 18, 2011
3:08 PM EST
Genre
Industrial
File Info
Song
2.6 MB
1 min 55 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.