All 10 stars from me man >:D
I've got to say, this calm tune reminds me of maybe a summer day with my friends,
just hanging out. Maybe going on a trip. idk, maybe its just me... lol anyway u have improved since ur first audio submission, i can say that without any doubts :D
keep it up man!
Thanks a lot... I've been working hard recently trying to get the beats to match and get the tempo just right. Yeah things have changed since my first soundtrack
Decent but disperate.
I did enjoy this song, all of the individual bits were well done but I have some criticisms.
Your drums kick in at ~:11 and it's good, they quickly pick up at ~:12 to what sounds like a lead in to something, a change-up or maybe a melodic addition (something with some power).
The problem is it never comes and these build up drums continue for WAY to long (till ~:44) where they settle down into a pattern that fits the piano and eventual guitar style.
My suggestion would be to tone it down a bit, maybe have the build up start a couple bars before the guitar begins (instead of right after the drums start), and finish off with a crash as the guitar begins. (Just a thought.)
Otherwise, it's a solid track, keep it up =)
I just now noticed that I put build up in the beginning. When I was making this sound track I wanted to put a build up to create a drop but, I just couldn't figure out how to do it with a piano. Thanx for the imput