Definately an improvemnt!
In comparison to Honor fallen this is a much better with more defined drum loops and an interesting gritty bass.
It confuses me why you decided to breakdown at 2 mins. the drums could have changed slightly or have more emphasis on the strings before building back up again...
Otherwise a well put together track! 8/10
Bonus point for a nice loop!
(At the time of review it currently resides at 2.66 which is unfair and should be higher considering Honor fallen is at 4.15)
will keep an eye out for any future tracks!