this was supposed to be my first real attempt but my computer did something weird and i had to stick with what i got cause im still using the demo :( my only big problems except the fact that i was only like halfway done are i feel its a little repetitive and the layers are a little bland there was also some spots were i feel it sounded a little off but my second opinion said he liked those odd parts so i guess its no big deal i hope someone likes it
Ignore Norato
He just jealous :) Anyways what I personally like about this song is that the atmosphere is a little dark and it is pretty easy to picture, and also I am going to agree with Treysen about the beat in the beginning, it was a little annoying.
im remeking this one eventually cause i wasnt finished with it when i had to post it that norato guy said he was drunk when he posted those i think he was just an ass though because he started to harass me until i threatened to get him kicked from newgrounds
wtf
man, try to make song that will NORMAL peaople listening to. These fags (mostly 14 yeats old kids) said. If you want to make music, you got to work a lot. Offcourse I can write how this song is good but the truth is, its´not.
You should check out my song 4 inspiration.
Have a nice day
DJ Norat
Two random downloaders say they do like it.
The beat with the hat is a little annoying, the intro with the 'donk donk donk donk' got really annoying pretty fast, but once it started changing up it wasn't too bad. Maybe get a stronger kick and a more defined bass line that is also more dance/techno sounding.
But the biggest beef I have with this is the beat, needs to change somehow yeah? Or different samples, it gets really annoying really quick, just my opinion.
Otherwise great job for a first attempt :O...
ya i agree totally wheni started to make it i wasent satusfied with itat all but for some reason my computer did something stupid and i had to livewith whati got i couldnt justreload it cause im only using the demo version of the program :( i wanted to do a lot with thisit was gona be really good but its kida bland now im gona have to remake it someday
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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