not bad needs some work.
this is pretty good, I'm going over your stuf and you got great melodies, but it seems like improv, which is good but it doesn't have like a memorable chorus or driving beat. The last thing I would say is to switch that brass like thing your using for some Violas or Violins, cause they sound like MiDi.
Pretty beautiful, very short though. I do like it, but I agree with Gamekrazzy that the intro needs a little work. However, I do like it. Though I still feel like I'm listening to the midi of a song. However, still getting a feel for your style, so maybe that's just how you write. I'll find out soon enough.
I, myself, are extremely jealous of your skill with piano-based melodies.
However, if you were to mix it up at some point, you could make your saw pads become more dominant at some point during the song.
Perhaps also some more variation into higher octaves with the piano as well and perhaps more reverb?
But all things considered, very good job.
Lol I laugh at haters making low scores.
If I was everyone in the world. I would totally, rate this 5/5.
not much of a review...
:D I voted before I listened to the whole song, but I gave it a 5, dude, this has some really cool things in it, but also some bad stuff, though not enough for it to be rated 2. WTF, I see this, even though it was put together fast, and is just ideas strewn together at at least a rating of 3/5 or higher. :P Nice job. 7/10. Try to think out your intros as much as you do your middle, and end.