It took me all of 20 seconds to rate this 5 stars, it's very professionally made.
Intro: Great job with this. You start it off a little slow and build the listener up to the fast paced song. I would dwell on the slower part though, I really love when song start at a snails pace and build up to what they want. You should experiment with that.
Melody: It was very pushing, which is a good thing. It didn't feel like it was dragging at all. I suggest using a different tone because it almost blends in with the background too much and you lose it at some parts.
Ending: It was a little awkward. The song sounded like it just fell off a cliff. You need to put the same amount of work in the ending of the song as you do in the beginning and the middle.
Overall: It's a great piece of music that could use a little bit of tweaking.
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