Although some opinions may vary, you are not making Dance music, but you are making music to dance to. ;)
1) Whats with the long silence at the beginning and all throughout the song?
2) There is a ding when ever the bass is alone. I know you probably intended for this and that is cool! I am just putting my opinions down.
1) My favorite part was the beginning. It was so....AWESOME!
2) The Silences are cool, maybe once or twice, but not every 5 seconds!
Keep it up Man! I like your work!
I don't know what you mean by silences, though.
Maybe it's skipping?