It sounds good but...
It's just a little too repetitive. I'm not sure if that was what you were going for but around the 3 minute mark it started to get better so i know you can do better. Keep at it! 4/5
Look forward to your best work.
There's a thousand reasons I can give for it being how it is, like how I love structure and repetition and minimalism etc. etc.
The truth is the software I use is only a trial version and they only give me so many audio clips to work with, and there's only so much I can do.
After two songs, I haven't got much left to ride on.
But the ABSOLUTE TRUTH is that I just don't like too much variation in my electronica, and that's not the same for everyone.
i like this! its very robotic.