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Uploaded
Feb 11, 2011 | 9:13 PM EST
File Info
Song
3.1 MB
1 min 21 sec
Score
4.08 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.08 / 5 stars
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1,005 Plays | 38 Downloads
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Genres:
Easy Listening - Classical
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Author Comments

This piece is for MATA, I am hoping I can get really good advice for this, I want this to by the best one I have done yet!

Reviews


DookeymuffinDookeymuffin

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Since it is WIP

I think this will turn out great if you work on it!
1. Interesting use of chords, i like it. It gives this 'wispy rainy day longing' feel. Cliche, yes, but that's the feel I get from it.

2. With only one instrument you did a pretty dang good job keeping me busy with the melody. I had a whole listen through without wanting to skip forward.
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3. I love the ending 'duuuun'! I hope you add more to the middle and use that at the end.
Good luck with finishing and thanks for reviewing my song.



HotSaxHotSax

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice job.

So, let's get started. I liked the piece, overall, btw.

1. Just a matter of personal opinion, but this piece needs some more development when it comes to the melody. I like it, but it just seems a little... empty? I guess that's the right word.

2. I like the build-up the rhythm gets.

3. Maybe it should be a bit longer, 1:21 seems a little short. That would give you some extra time to add some more development into it.

4. I love the relaxing quality to it.

So yeah, those are the 4 things I thought I'd let you know. Yeah, I know, I'm not the greatest music critic :P. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to seeing the newest version of this song. :)


Slaytesics responds:

Why thanks, and I will absolutely work on it more, want to make it have more buildup


fattyfudgefattyfudge

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Beautiful

An excellent and relaxing song! I enjoyed it thoroughly however i thought it could last a bit longer than 1:21. Great!


Slaytesics responds:

Don't worry, only a WIP, send me a message if you could add anything, that would be awesome.