I enjoyed listening to this. I like how it has presence (for lack of a better word. Maybe a better one would be strength.), but it's still music that I can listen to while doing something else like writing a paper. Although, I don't really like the fact that it just sort of ends. It get's all quick and exciting and then all of a sudden in a part that seems like the middle of something, it just stops at a really weird place. There's no accent or decrescendo or anything. It's even worse if you're listening to it on loop and it goes from that to the slow beginning sort of abruptly. Another suggestion I have would be to make that bass line that starts at around 44 seconds fade in a little bit more, and, conversly, have that sort of rough sound that fades in at about 1:12 start later and then get from soft to loud a bit more quickly.
Sorry about wall of text :-P
Keep making music!
I'd like to hear more!
I like the build up to the point at 1min in.
Keep at it!
Awesome =D. Glad you like it. Ive had this file going for a while now actually. Never wanted to work on it. I finally picked it back up again since i've got nothing going right now. Hope you like whats in store!