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Feb 11, 2011 | 1:57 AM EST
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3.3 MB
3 min 36 sec
3.58 / 5.00

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Rated 3.58 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

This is a song I wrote a little while back... open to interpretation. :) I kind of just wrote it on a whim.

Original song, yesyes.

I wrote the tune and the lyrics, but I got some help with the producing... which I still need to learn how to do.

But yes, everything is original.

Feedback of any sort is much appreciated! :D



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well enough

First, a review.

Instrumentals are not powerful enough. The mixing is, honestly, pretty bad. The feel of the song is very, very hard to understand. It sound like an attempt at getting into this world of music, which it sort of does, but not well enough. There are some really nice musical ideas that could have come out of this, but this track screams mediocre.

Voice is "nice". I feel you didn't really feel into this at the start, and had to gradually move in, but that's not my biggest complaint. Guitar at the vocals is so quiet it isn't worth being there. The shift is minuscule. I can see it, and hear it, but it has to be felt. Audio production is a big thing, nearly bigger than creative writing, so don't neglect it.

The second chorus had a nice, upbeat feel to it, but didn't do it for me. Rhythmically, the entire song is lacking. I felt it was there obligatorily. Hmph.

Melodies are nice. Harmony, to my definition, is the use of an instrument to complement another. Right now, focus more on the harmony, in this sense, and the instrumentals. I wish you all the best in the future, and hope you understand I was trying to be as constructive as possible.

On a final note, you sound like somebody I know, sort of. Are you Australian?


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Beatifull =)

i like it nice men