First thing, I liked the intro, it was good and so were the synths.
The pad (or whatever) at :24 the third note in your series sounded off, I'd have made it go;
start, up, up, and then what you did. Whereas your is like
Start up, down variation. . .
(I'm speaking in terms of pitch when I say up and down)
I just. . . it just felt like you were hitting a wrong note every time it came around and it detracted a lot from the song since it played most of the way through. . .
Now the building you did on that same progression mostly sounded good, there were one or two spots where it again sounded off, because of what it was based on but overall good work.
Liked the midway interlude, sounded great!
Your wind-down was good too.
Ending was a little abrupt but not so much as to detract from the song.
Hope that helps you along!
Harde breakbeat! Zit ook een melodietje in waar je echt high van wordt.
Zal vet zijn voor een flight game, een 2d vliegspel (van links naar rechts).
Doet me ook een beetje denken aan "Waterflame".
Waterflame :O, zkr dat jij bluft.. maar jij maakt ook goede muziek hoor!
It's great! i'm picturing fight/escape-scenes :)
Kind of survival game...
Good shit man I like the original feel to it good work! 10/10 5/5
I feel like underated :P
The feeling is just the start gives me a story i love it keep up the good work
Hey thank you :P, just was thinking in the beginning... What kind of song should I make? so, thats why I made that beginning..