Ideas better than this realization of them...
There are some cool melodic ideas going on here, but the quality of your MIDI realization is holding it back a bit. Work on your phrasing, making sure that there are crescendos and decrescendos, bowing changes for your strings etc. Even if your samples aren't fantastic you can still do a lot more. Thanks for sharing this!
Not a problem, thanks for sharing your thoughts!
I like it, but its a little slow (Try and ad some excitement to it). If it had a slightly bigger range of volume it would be better. Not to be offensive, but its like listening to a monotoned person, let it build up!
Thanks for the feedback, every bit helps!