Reminds me of Ice cream.
A song doesn't have to be long for it to be enjoyable. In fact, I prefer short songs because I have a short attention span.
This song was composed well there are parts in this song that sounded different, for as composure is going. Like in the beginning, you've used a different rhythm that I never heard before.
now, my only criticism about this song is the ending. It'sends too abruptly for this song. It's like it ends suddenly, then later, a little instrument is heard.
Nice work on this.
Oh yea I hear you there, at the instumental part, I didnt know how to just make the silence longer for just an end, you know how it gets when theres a loop, it don't work for something thats suppose to be just a song. Infact I still don't know how to do it without making the part that makes the end noticable lol. Thanks for the critasism. It helpfull =)
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