Not terrible, but not great. The chords and song structure are okay but the playing is a little off in places, but nothing practice won't cure. Also the audio quality is rather bad, and the silence at the beginning is not necessary.
All in all just practice a bit and get a better recording software. Use the software to cut out the bit at the beginning, and make sure it all sounds okay.
Thanks for your honesty. And I apologize about the audio quality, my interface stopped working for some reason, so I had to just put a mic near the amp and pray for the best. But thanks again for taking the time to listen and critique.