I honestly really like it
The recording could use some work, a decent bit of static, probably due to the mic.
Otherwise, I really like the sound of it, might be a tad bit too echoey, but it suits the feel. You have a nice voice, and your chord transitions are nice. I can feel the emotions in it.
Could use some more to it, like some strings that come in around 1:53, that would be neat. I think you deserve a better score, but eh, the highest rated songs are all trancey, loud, electronic stuff. I have a feeling the people around here aren't totally into your type of music :P
thx for the tips, ya i just kinda threw this one up here to improve it, i did alota techno before im just now sings and playin gutiar but i just hope someone out there likes it no matter what the score on NG is, thats for being one
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.