Consistent and even
I don't like what I hear at 00:29, it sounds like a hiccup there in your music. The air instruments give a sort of oriental feel as where the deeper base gives a general sense of doom and a march at the same time. It matches your shogun theme but could have a climax of horns at the end joining in. Not too bad overall.
Thanks for the ideas. I might make another song soon. This one has been eating away at me for months. so i finally broke down and bought a new keyboard. :D Thanks for the review!