Your voice is great, matches the song perfectly, and it's a raw song with lots of emotion. Thought it was awesome man!
The only thing I'd say to work on is maybe to fix the tuning of the guitar- you can really hear some of the notes out of tune at the beginning. Also, I know that you maybe didn't record this with the best recording gear in the world, but it seems like we get more strum than notes whenever the guitar is playing.
Keep up the work!