I like it!
But I agree with the below. Idk it's really good but repetitive for about a minute right in the middle. It's really good though and all your songs are getting more and more inventive. Maybe work on shortening miscellaneous bits but keep the flow. You've always been able to achieve flow ;)
I know you are a beginner, but I'm still going to be honest with you.
Listening to the whole thing was hard to do for me, because it is really repetitive up until about 3:15.
The idea is a good one though. I like the name and concept, you just need a little polishing out.
Practice makes it worth it.
nice man just check your levels. patience.
let me know if you wanna fuck around with some sounds and make a track.