i agree with blue gill...

the intro is kinda repetitive. if i were to remix it id take out the first few seconds. other than the intro killing my tast in the song its pretty good after that. jes keep em commin man, ill tear them apart and rate the rite way.

Dragon studios

Keeps you waiting...

It kinda keeps you waiting forever and ever for the buildup to finish, but awkwardly enough theres no real drop-to-climax moment. The thing is the melody just feels really stationary, and its all a little too low, as in, it needs a little more in the mid-to-high range. I think it would be great if you took the melody up at some point, or at least gave it a layered higher octave - that'd work well for a climax. But the way it is right now, it kinda stops a bunch of times, starts building up, but then stops again. Tone and mastering are nice, just try and get that melody right