the one voice kept being far too loud and very painful on the ears near the intro. Not bad though. Pallet Town has one of the cheesiest intro town tunes though as far as I know. This isn't that bad. Just have the one voice not making the ears hurt every few seconds and otherwise this seems to be pretty good.
Good work on a Pokemon song.
Well, it was a good effort. I think. But, you ought to work on a few things. Tonal quality of the voice, not cracking on high notes (get someone who is actually supposed to sing in that range,) sound quality of the recording, and the right notes in the first place. The rhythms and notes were off. But... You get 2/10, 1/5 for the effort.
Lol... "notes were off" wtf of course they were this was supposed to be funny. I have perfect pitch by the way, piss the hell off, I know if I'm singing off or not, and I am fully aware of some off pitch singing. Before you tell me that the actual notes sung were wrong, think again, I know they're right.