Needs a little work
at (:07) the sudden instrument thrown in was really loud, and needs to be toned down some. Aside from that it sounds pretty good. As well, I think the snare is off tempo and needs a tad bit of editing, because it sounds more random than anything else.
Aside from that it's pretty good.
4? :( Honestly though, thanks for your feedback
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