Sounds good so far
Just fix up that beat, it doesn't flow well. I'd have a few beats that I could put up there but hey you experiment with different beats.
Also when the beat comes on try adding a bass or something because something needs to reinforce the drums to the song or else it kinda sounds mis matched and not well put together, y'know what I mean?
I like the strings and stuff, just add a little more to the bass of the track and fix up that drums, k?