Definatly needs more bass
Its got no real pumping beat. Thats why I dont feel like danceing
Needs more bass
It's not really.. loud, I can't seem to associate it with the title. It's not much of a loud, pumping song that people would dance to, but otherwise, it's still really good.
Close, but its missing something.
the sound reminds me of another artist on here, Dimrain47, but the peice doesnt grab me. its very nice, just needs a little work. not a composer myself, so i cant actually give alot of help on how to fix it or whats not there. =/ sry
I agree with NinjaOtter
The blend doesn't really work but my main problem is it doesn't progress. You could take two loops and go back and forth and it would go at the same pace. Don't be afraid to use crescendo and decrescendo. Crescendo can be annoying if all you do is blast in the lister's ear, if you call that crescendo. Yet decrescendo can turn a moderate piece into a great one. Decrescendo lets the listener's mind build suspense. I have yet to hear something that overuses decrescendo.
It's really nothing we haven't all heard before. The instruments, chord progressions, and beat are all pretty generic, imo. Sounds like a whole lot of loops to me, and the production isn't all that great. I don't feel like the sounds blend together very well. You might want to work on the volumes of the sounds. I felt jerked out of the song by a few of the sudden transitions in there, and honestly, I don't feel like the song really goes anywhere.
Don't get me wrong, it's not bad, but it's definitely not great, in my honest opinion (and I enjoy this style of music, too). But that's all it is, opinion.
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