It seems the downrater has the exact same level as I do :/
The melody is nice, but I think the rhythm is a bit lacking. Also your instrument choices, are just a little bit off in my opinion, especially with the main melodic instrument. There is hardly any dynamic variation or shifts in feel, which is pretty meh, but I think you could have worked with the melody to create something a little more exciting. I really like the melody here, it's very cool. With that in mind, good luck on any future projects. Good work!