I'm assuming you have just started producing music.
The melodies etc sound good.
The kick was the only thing that needed improvement. Don't use that style kick, it sounds too "rockish" and throws off the entire song.
Get some new samples, as a kick with more punch would bring this track to life :D
Actually, I'm not new at all! :)
It is just the style I wanted. I wanted to make a real raw song. But I was also mixing with a guitar amplifier so it sounded so much different. But to come to think of it, the kick actually might sound good if I changed it.
Thanks for the tip!
This is good. I like the drum transitions, and its an overall good song. Nicely done.
I wish the other voters thought the same! :)