I agree with Vorenthral each line needs to have its own emphasis. I get the whole concept of the song, don't get me wrong, but the piano part around 1:39 and on started to clash with your synth and it got a little outta hand.
\Overall/ 7/10 4/5 Not bad.
Its good but...
It feels unfinished and a bit chaotic at times but not the good chaotic. Too many levels on levels without the proper phasing to give the right emphasis, which made it feel sloppy. Could be great with a bit of polish though.
its ok i like its
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