It certainly works as a practice assignment, but as a song for the Audio portal, it's just not enough.
Maybe if you expanded on this song, made it longer and added complexity, it would be worth more than a meh to the standard audio junkie.
Though I must say, it's still better than half of the trash on this site!
Thanks you. i think i should make it longer. this is just the little bit i had to compose for my theory class.
maybe i'll give it a better synth sound too.