This was funny(Mainly the outro). I like the chorus. Your music on soundclick is better though, lol.
Yea, I try ta throw in a little humor in some songs here n their. N SEE HE KNOWS! lol, my music on soundclick is better. BUT, I will be uploading some new songs on both here n soundclick that blow all of these outta the water. n the very few 1's I got on D-music.com r actually pretty good to. Any way, enough of my dumb ass babblin, thanks for the review man. I appreciate it.
well erm....u r right
u do not need to cuzz have a str8 fire track...this is true....but however you do need to be on key n on the beat....I don't have a prollem witcha so dun like rate mah music low im juss giving an honest opinion...lyrics are actually alright....flow needs a little work
keep practicin...u might be able to take over ng one day ;)
I gave it a 3...for effort, claritys not too bad, lyrics...all that good stuff=3....coulda been 4 or 5 if u were on key the whole song
take it easy man
True true, n I understand whair your comin from man im not gonna be a little ass hole n do that. Thats like preschool shit lol. N I will keep that in mind. Oh yea n thanks for bein honest, I hate it people tell me what I wanna hear. Ya no? If its good, its good if it sucks, tell me. Any way, take it easy.
They don't know . . .
Yeah they don't know. Do you cuss that much that you had to make this track? Damn. It's cool. Just work on yo bars some more. It sounds like the same thing over and over again. Switch it up a little and maybe use some metaphors or something. Other than that it's good shit.
Thanks, n this track is like 3 months old, my new stuff has changed ALOT, diversity out the ass, n ill work on usin metaphors. Thanks for the review n advice. Oh yea n because the hole church thing n I got a "request" E-mail askin 2 make a track with out cussin. So I was like, pfff alright. Any way thanks again man. Take it easy.