Besides the fact that I can probably name all the FL defaults you used, the beat is obnoxious and the melodies are repetitive. I think you tried really hard to fit into the hard trance genre, but I think you need some more practice.
I agree, I am just a noob yet. :D
So you better like it! Keep it up.
Thanks chum! I will make more, but it will take time. :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.