Hey I like this
Thats good for you :D , Thank you.
I love the darkness of it.
But you already know I like dark stuff. It would go great with a zombie or monster video game. I like the drums, and the creepy melody. I like the little changes. What program do you use? Do you use a keyboard? I have a Korg and a Yamaha that I use, plus guitars, a violin, and some analog drums that I sample.
I use Vengeance packs, Nexus and Fruity loops. And I wasn't that happy about the drums :). But everyone got his own taste.
Very dark and interesting to begin with, I rather like the introduction of the (piano?).
The song progresses quite a lot during it, although it sounds a bit iffy at times, due to lots of instruments playing. Especially around the 2:15 mark, that needs fixing, preferably in the terms of a quieter drum kit.
Either way, thats my opinion.
Enjoyable piece, but needs fixing. (Too much instruments playing)
Thank you for your review, I understand wat you mean, tho I hate NG a bit because You hvae to submit a MP3 file tho MP3 files can't handle the sound of much instruments playing. (Wave do). And I agree with you that I have to rearange the sound of the drum kit.(BTW I have to change the drum kit too) I am planning to fix this and put it in my upcoming first album. (Looking if some one is buying it and see how it works)
the beginning of the song was pretty good.in 1:00 you added song weird beats that i think you shouldn't added them.You say that you worked hard and i was impressed but you said "Feel free to skip to 1:55 if you don't got the time.." well that way i wont take you seriously because i feel like you think the that,that part of the song wasn't so good or something i dont know if your understanding what im saying here,(example:i work so hard on my 1st animation thats why it took me 6 months and its running time is 10 min but feel free to skip 5 mins of it).what im saying is that if you worked hard on something you want people to hear or see it all and tell you your quick spots so by people skiping to 1:55 there wont listin all your weak parts and they wont get a clear picture of your sond or what ever you submit to this awesome site. This should be used in a kick ass video game.
I see wat you mean, didn't thought about it in that way :), thanks for showing me tho.
I like this a lot. Just a couple suggestions: The drum track get a little repetitive by the end. Also, a little 20 second or so melodic interlude somewhere around the break at 1:06 could break the rest of it through the roof. Overall, great work! Can't wait to hear more like this.
In the beginning of making music I thought in music the only imprtant thing is melody, so for around a half year I only used the same kick/snare... Now I need to expiriment with it more because it is REALLY imprtant, don't know why I am telling you this, but I love coca cola..... Thanks for the review..
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.