Great, but something's missing.
It had a very tight sound, but...It sounds so thin. And as far as this goes musically, creative composition. Not boring at all. Try to add a rhytm guitar in the back playing som chords, and leave a little more groove? The BD was 100% synchronized all the way with the guitars, it sounds like.
But that is all based on opinion. Perhaps others might consider this perfect.
But anyway, i suggest you put on a bass, and that you increase the sound of the cymbals.
Thanks for the critisism dude. This is a somewhat rough work in progress, so keep an eye out for the full version comming soon! :)
This should be at the top of the portal.
Anyone who disagrees is another Newgrounds techno dumbfuck
:D Thanks meing!