Good beat, not so good melody

6.5

First two minutes are kind of boring. You build it up alot with simply repitition, I'm not very fond of the "voices" i don't know if it actually voices, but whatever it is that sounds like guys going ah ah ah ah, uh uh uh uh. Would have been cooler if you had a synth do it imo.

You did get a good beat going for a while there, but you didn't really develop the melody very well. it just repeated over and over and over.

Don't worry about being able to lay down a good beat and getting effects in there, you can do that. Work on keeping the melodic+harmonic line interesting. it gets old pretty fast. It's like you are hiding repetitive music behind effects and a beat. you want to use the beat and effects to ENHANCE a good melody, not hide it.