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Jan 24, 2011 | 4:27 AM EST
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12.8 MB
5 min 37 sec
4.20 / 5.00

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Rated 4.20 / 5 stars
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Well, my creative juices were flowing i suppose because i started freestyling on my workstation and six minutes later this is created. I hope you like it, very little editing was done to this so there are a few mistakes and timing issues throughout.

What i was trying to get across through this song was how someone can watch someone else through a window and feel as if they're being jipped in their lives. Why can't one man have the same material posessions as the other man? Why should anyone feel inferior to those who own more, have nicer things, why is it such a staple in our culture these days. It's about Envy, and it's about the pursuit of happiness every person has to go on in order to finally attain that satisfaction in life.

I might polish it, but that would take away from the freestyle element of it. Tell me what you think in the review section :D

-Thunderhorse L



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Emotional song needs emotional samples!

When writing these kind of slower piano based songs, so much depends on your piano samples, if your still using stock samples id reccomend finding some soundfonts or if ya got the time serach for a vst called "prova" which is really good.

Not something id actively listen to usually, saw someone mentioned Final fantasy below and yes, i could totally see this in a final fantasy game.

Also make sure your addign dynamics(volume of individual notes) when ur sequencing emotional instruments, even go overboard with loud notes then soft just so the lsitener doesnt get the impression of monotony. Loved when the everything checked in at 3:30 ish.

Also try sticking to that 4/4 a little more, sure its nice to get instresting rhythms but a couple parts had some awkward beat skips and rhythms etc.

I like where your going dude keep it up.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Epicness and epicosity in equal measure

This makes me want to play final fantasy.

I especially like the accompanying text referring to the desire of materialistic items. You're track makes me wish i had better it works, if that was the intention?



ThunderHorseL responds:

Logic does wonders. Soundfontz<3 Also, Thanks for the review! :D


Rated 5 / 5 stars

this is tits!!!!

absolutely beatiful

5/5 and 10/10

ThunderHorseL responds:

10 for tits!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


I think you have done an awsome effort with your imagery, your notes really explain the feeling your tryng to express as does your cord progressions, its got a sad feel to it, and in my mind it conjures pitty, but thats just what I get when I close my eyes, and I like the fact its free styled, keep it that way :)
Great work!