It definantly sounds dafty but I think it could of changed more instead of having the same loop for almost three minutes. In the beginning, it was definantly chill but even daft stuff needs to have variation. Maybe if you made it like a conversation or something. When someone says or does something silly it's more like "thank god no one saw that" and then someone did see it and tells the person "that was daft".
Thanks for the review! Yea I didn't take the time to make a whole lot of variation. It's something I need to work on