I liked it. I just needs work. I liked your singing and didn't at the same time. Seemed too forced. Reminded me of Vermillion Part 2 by Slipknot.
Yea I wasn't too proud of this one.The lyrics were thrown together in less than 10 minutes and we didn't really spend time recording it.It was kind of like a one take deal.I'm not supposed to be singing that high lol.I should have more stuff up within a few months depending on how much recording time is going to cost.But it won't be acoustic, it will have a harder sound.Thank you for the feedback though