Just came back to see what you've improved in your work; and you're really shaping up! I love it, good amounts of variation; drums fit A LOT better within the song, keep it up!
I think you have done a great job here mate! but not to sound like a broken record, some critiquing of your master would take it to the next level and like "Cardboardowl" said some of your synths could maybe be changed or effects added to give them more "wow" factor!
keep it coming mate!
thanks :D and yeahh... im still a rookie with making the synths, im trying not to use presets as much as i can , so yeah. Still trying to get the hang of making the synths myself :)
Good music, bad sounds
Your problem isn't with getting a good tune together, you can do that. you have an issue with making the tune sound good, via equalization and mixing and balance and all that junk. most of your instruments quality is lacking. try and explore instrument styles and adjust some equalization.
Also your bass could use a boost.
thanks bud , ill take your advice