The beat is simple yet the orchestration is pretty good, and the scratching is pretty awesome. The hook is pretty awesome, reminds me of Mos Def's "Mathematics", which is saying something, because that is the best beat EVAR MAED :) Good job though.
The lyrics are slightly better than your other song Conformist, and that's probably because Intaflex was on it, to be honest. I didn't really feel his flow but on some occasions you deliver some potent lines.
OK, so I heard some of SOS's songs and I think your flow is much better than his, but I still reckon that he's got a point that you could lighten up on the whole "666 im evil just shoot yourself you've got a small male organ" thing. Sometimes it works but mostly it just sounds desperate, e.g. the stuff about killing yourself. I mean, what about us who LOVE life? (LOL I agree it's the minority but I do :3) I think that's what topgun means.
It's a good mix, and a middling-to-good lyrical delivery, with pretty top-notch scratching in there. The sample at about 1:30 is the most depressing part, which kind of makes me feel bad inside instead of good. I like music that makes me feel good, really.
So if you make a track about something a little bit happy, or something about what's good in your life, chat me up. I would LOVE to hear it :). But this genre always points out the bad things, and I don't like that. As a musical work, it's sound, but for my personal preference, I would stay away from this style of work. Thanks for sharing though, and letting me criticise you :) Makes me want to make a rap track about you :P
--Production-- = 16/20
--Experience-- = 13/20
--Style-- = 8/20
--Wow Factor-- = 13/20
--Personal Tilt-- = 7/20
OVERALL SCORE: 57/100
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