Interesting but boring
I came here via your post on the forum. Very good for a first try, I must say.
Although the tutorials on youtube don't really help much, since when your starting out, most likely you have the free version, which is not nearly as flexible or as productive as the bought version(i have a friend who has the complete, $500 version... I want to steal his computer :P). I personally learn better when I find things out for myself, and also, you get tons of little surprises(not all good im afraid :P) and find new things out about the program all the time. Although FL Studio, which i use also, is quite versitile, having the free version doesn't cut it for me, although I still use it for my music.
If you are just first beginning, and need some good sounds and beats, I'd suggest looking through the preloaded songs on fl studio. They can help you jumpstart by giving you ideas(don't steal them! :D) and some awesome sounds. Unfortunatley, on FL Studio, at least for me, when you load a premade song, some sounds don't load properly, and there's not much you can add. I don't know if it;s the program or the virus that recently destroyed my harddrive... anyway, that should give you some help.
As for scoring, I'm going to have to agree with killaboy69. It's very repetitive, and not long enough to be healthfully considered by a club for example(sorry for crushing you hopes and dreams :[ ). Although do what I did, and keep trying! Everything I started out doing was complete crap, so you're better off than me. If you want to see some real trash, look up music by NJAtlantic and WinterDagger2, some of my older accounts. Don't forget to blam them! :)
Hope this helped a little :)
P.S. I'm going easy on scoring, since it's your first time. Normally, it would be a 3/10 and a 1/5 :3
I mean its good, just not enough variation alot of it was the same tune being played over and over, next time try use a bit more variation and when it gets on a long loop but something in the middle.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.