Wow, you sure do catch my attention
In a sense, this is really good, if it were to go to a flash artist whom wanted to give a dark feel to a character, he'd need to contact you. Otherwise man, you're writing stuff that's constantly catching my eyes and ears, repetition sucks, but for this music it seems appropriate.
Good Luck! ^_^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.