Add More Bass
Kind of annoying hearing the same tone over and over again, adding in a bass would have improved it overall its enjoyable nice effort! Keep it going
30 minutes is good
This song is alright, but has no real hooking. The rhythm is the main focus here, obviously, and I don't think this was exploited enough. Melodically, the song needs much more. Hearing the same tone over and over again is annoying, even if it's rhythmically awesome. For a 30 minute song (production time), it's alright, but should be more. Good effort!
thanks for the advice, i might remix this