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Dec 25, 2005 | 7:20 PM EST
File Info
3.4 MB
3 min 44 sec
2.00 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 2.00 / 5 stars
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462 Plays | 183 Downloads
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Electronic - Trance

Author Comments

Changed a lot, took out some sequences and made beginning more interesting



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Ok, here's what I think

Personally, I think you know what you're doing. You do need some practice, though, if you're gonna make it in trance (we all do, myself included!!) Here's some tips for next time, if you'd like 'em.

One, your beats are good but they need to come up. Try out different EQ's, especially on the kicks. You wanna feel 'em, and I'm not feeling 'em.

Second, I can sympathize with your choice of melodies... but they sometimes detract from the song. For example- when you start adding the lead synth in "The Ender, PT1", the melody you chose just didn't make sense with the bassline. The rythym was off, plus the actual melody of the piece didn't really flow. It was musically interesting- just not trance. Take a listen to others on the portal and compare.

Your mastering is coming along. Reverb is your friend, chorus and flange too for synths. EXPERIMENT, but make sure you grow!! Add some dynamics in with your FX.

Good luck dude. I have high hopes for ya.

Seek ye redemption for the sin of conformity.


IamMark responds:

thank you for the review but as it turned out this version was not supposed to have been uploaded. the 2nd instrument you hear was actually so annoying to me that i went with somethin else but i accidentally uploaded this one. Onto the song itself...I keep forgetting about those other synths, I am still new to this whole thing so it may take a lil time to learn especially since im teaching myself, but i will give reverb a try when i think about it. Yes, I know I lack bass. But I dont notice because the sub on my computer hits just fine.