Instruments are great. Musically, it probably portrayed what you were going for. I like it, however, I didn't feel there was enough symphonic elements. What I mean is, the instruments are meant to give each other the melody and harmony through the track. I also felt the instruments all played exactly the same thing over each other, just at different octaves, and there wasn't enough harmonization. Another thing is dynamics and panning, which are vastly neglected.
The drumming sounds really nice, and I especially liked the string part near the end of. You have a nice style, and you will definitely get much better in the future. Keep up the good work!