It got a little hectic and out of sync when the gatar comes in. Try cleaning that up and you will have a real winner!
I'll do my bestest.
Nice talent but a few pointers
Songs this long really need some variation, I listened to it a while then began to hear repetitions, a lot. I skipped through sections and it sounded the same. I like the riff, but you need variations, breaks, or bridges. You need to center on a riff and build upon it so that when you do play it over and over, it sounds new and more exciting. I can tell you have talent and I do like your song, but it's either too long or doesn't have enough variation for your length. Keep up the good work though.
There is variation, but it's very slight. The second time the through there's an underlying synth that gets added. I completely see where you're coming from on how it needs more variation, but this song was just meant as a simple background song used in a movie or something, so I didn't want too much variation or else it might be distracting.
Thanks for listening!
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