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My second Fl Studio submission, hopefully they continue to get better as i go along.

-Robs

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good job 5/5



I thought I'd drop by again

Again, very good instrumentation. Your choice of sounds here are very good. In this one, the chord progression seems a little more normal, and the melodies fit a lot more. The volume still clips in places though, so just lower the volume on the master channel, boost the drum volume a little, because its almost impossible to hear the hi-hats in the background.

At 1:56 you need drums. No doubt about it after a buildup like that, there needs to be huge punchy kicks (not the fruit kick though, that thing kinda sucks) reverb snares, and a typical open hat.

This one is definatly an improvement from the first track. As I said before keep at it, play around with different sounds, add drums, a more solid bassline (3xosc with all the oscilators set on the far left setting with the "course" knob turned all the way down can make a really deep sine bass which adds more of a flow to the track)

7/10
3/5

Ste :D


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Wow :D

I am pretty sure you will get better if you keep working at it :D This is already really good!

The intro is really long, and most Newground listeners only have the attention span for 3 second intros, which is sad for Trance producers since the intros are beautiful and can run up to three minutes alone lol.

But anyway, great work! Suggestions, I could only really say add some percussion and a baseline :) That's all thats missing! seriously, good job!

thanks for the upload ;)


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hey joe!;

you've been working on that new trance song for days, you haven't even eaten anything. you going to be skeletal...

joe?

... Noh ...


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Robs759
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Listens
427
Downloads
28
Votes
6
Score
3.61 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 14, 2011
9:09 AM EST
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
3.3 MB
2 min 55 sec

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