me again again XD XD
Well, here's what I have to say with this version:
1-it starts even more suddenly, what the hell: think progression.
3-Again those really high energy synths should come in earlier in the song: no longer then halfway, not a 3/4 of the song. If needed, make the song shorter
4-That bass(?), is way too overpowering. A bass is a background instrument. I know the instruments in FL don't always have similar volume, but there's always a way to reduce it, if you really can't find anything, make everything else louder XD
5-Again, what's with the weird reversed cymbal at the end..., this time your fade out was long enough to be called an outro on it's own...
6-It's not that your song is bad, but it needs some cleaning up to be a really good song. You've improved it with every version, but you repeat some mistakes.
keep making music, you have great potential dude,
P.S.: IF you make another version of this song, don't hesitate to pm me if you want my opinion on it, ok :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.