I can't say I'd do much better, but allow me to start out with a quick disclaimer. This rating is NOT about the quality of your microphone. Your singing really needs work. The timing and key are both off at many various points. I think most of the verses were a half step lower than they should've been, and it was very dissonant and very hard to listen to. I did listen the whole way through, and I think you just need some practice. Sing from your stomach, not your throat, and work on your timing. Good luck!
Ummmm.........you really need to think about posting before you do so. I have not ever heard something so horrible as this.
MY FUCKING EARS
Can you please learn how to sing, seriously, you just ruined one of my favourite songs of all time.
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