Still has much room for improvement
At some parts, I feel like the notes are clashing into (or brushing up against) each other creating a tonal harmonic imbalance. Try positioning the notes so that they complement each other as in the same chord scale instead of causing them to destroy or overrun one another. If you do that, it will make them sound "together" instead of "all scattered."
Thanks for telling me your thoughts. When I wrote this track, I thought some clashing notes would make the atmosphere better. I agree that the melodies could be a little tighter instead of "All Scattered".